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JAWS 5-RESURFACED

Post  captainmason on 6/1/2011, 10:18 pm

WARNING:THE FOLLOW IS EXTREMELY GRAPHIC.IF YOU HAVE A WEAK STOMACH ,OR SOMETHING ALONG THOSE LINES, DO NOT READ THIS. I AM NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR THE EXPERIENCE.


NOW ENJOY


chapter 1:a rough start to a rough day
Spoiler:
It swam faster,seemingly effortless,against the waves.panic overwhelmed my body and i became less coordinated.i could feel the waves,caused by the leviathon behind me.closer,closer.There's the beach!!I just need ten more minutes.but the hope was vain as i felt a tearing sensation go through my leg and,as i went under, tasted the blood mixed with tears and ocean water.my sight grew faded and my head swam.the light going further away,as if running away in terror of this demon of the sea.i ran out of breath and tried to breath in as water flooded my lungs.I started to hear a voice.
"John...John..JOHN!!"
I awoke in a panic and accidentally headbutted my older sister.
"OW!you little S#%t!"
"sorry...reflex."
"just wake up.it time to go to swim meet."
"fine..."
I checked my text messages and saw liz had texted me several times in the last ten minutes.I love her but this has to stop.i text her back saying good morning and ill see her after swim meet at the beach.Before i could put down my phone she texts me back saying "ok love ya!"
I took a shower,got dressed, and packed my bag for swim meet.I suddenly have a flashback to my childhood.watching Alex Kitner being attacked,then disappearing in a patch of red blood.nothing left but pieces of the yellow raft.This was going to be a long day
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chapter 2:looking back and resurfacing old fears
Spoiler:
Ever since I was 10 i had a fear of sharks.It happened on Sunday, June 29th when Alex Kitner was eaten by the beast that terrorized my home for about a week.The whole summer we never set a toe in the water in fear that there were more of THEM waiting to eat us.still,8 years exactly since my friend was eaten,and i turned 10,i have a feeling history is about to repeat itself.
My mind drifts and,unnoticed by me,so does my truck and before i know it im spinning in air,plummeting towards the water.As soon as it happens,im thrown against the windshield violently.somehow the seat belt snapped.i can only look in terror as i go down,water steadily pouring in.I try to open the door,though knowing it wont budge.In the midst of the panic i see it.gliding smoothly through the water.almost like its flying.beautiful but terrorfying all in one.the angel of death.a great white shark.it sees me and i realize i have a open cut on my arm from where i hit something.I get my pocket knife and stab wildly at the already cracked windshield.it finally breaks as the beast knocks full charge into the truck nearly taking off a door.I wildly swim out and up.Somehow I make it and make for the shore.I realize the bridge gave out.but it was a sturdy bridge.something must of...and it hits me about the same time the shark does,that this perfect eating machine,destroyed the bridge.Somehow the shark misses and I swim torwards shore.

It swam faster,seemingly effortless,against the waves.panic overwhelmed my body and i became less coordinated.i could feel the waves,caused by the leviathon behind me.closer,closer.There's the beach!!I just need ten more minutes.but the hope was vain as i felt a tearing sensation go through my leg and,as i went under, tasted the blood mixed with tears and ocean water.my sight grew faded and my head swam.the light going further away,as if running away in terror of this demon of the sea.i ran out of breath and tried to breath in as water flooded my lungs.I thought I was going to die.But then the beast let go,and it swims away.i then see a group of dolphins.They fend of the shark and lead me to shore.God i love mammals.and god do i hate the ocean.I try to walk but realize my right leg is shredded to bits.A group of sunbathers look on in horror and the paramedics come as i start to fade into unconciousness
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Chapter 3:awakening

Spoiler:
I awoke with a jerk which sent a pain spasming through my body.I try to scream but it gets choked off by the tube in my throat.I rip it out and gasp for air.IM ALIVE.A nurse walks in smiling and says,"well good morning!how are you doing?"
"like crap."i say.
"Well i would too if i...what happened exactly?if its not too much to ask."
The events played through my mind at lightning speed.
"I was driving when a shark made the bridge collapse,therefore making my truck go in.I managed to get out but I was attacked by the Shark only to be saved by a pod of dolphins."
the nurse has a puzzled look on her face and checks my stats.
"Its most likely the morphine talking..."she says to herself and walks out.
I look at my leg which is severely scarred.So I have the scars,The truck under water,and a bridge that somehow collapsed by no other logical explanation and they still wont believe me.The 4th of July is in a couple of days and we could have a panic on our hands if they dont believe me.Were not gonna need body bags because there will be nothing left
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Chapter 4:the war begins
I know its out there.No one can tell me otherwise.I have to warn them,but will it be for nothing?Its not that they mean to put lives in danger,but the dont want to believe it is happening again.
I walk to city hall and walk past the clerks desk and right through Mayor Vaughn jr.'s office and he fell out of his chair backwards.The lazy bastard.
"John goddamit!!knock next time!"
"We have another Shark problem."
"Not you too!"
"wait...I'm not he only one?!"
"The cororner came in with a body and says a shark did it...i dont know how he can-"
"YOU DONT KNOW?!HE IS PAID TO KNOW HOW PEOPLE FUCKING DIE AND YOU HAVE THE AUDACITY TO SAY YOU DONT KNOW HOW?"
"John lower your voice!"
"NO!WE HAVE A DEAD BODY,ME BEING ATTACKED AND A BRIDGE IN PIECES, STRANDING MY FAMILY ON OUR PRIVATE ISLAND!NOW YOU NEED TO DO SOMETHING OR I WILL!"
"John!if you tell anyone ill have your ass!you always rush into things without looking at all the details!"
"so sue me you ignorant son of a bitch!"
I spin around and run out with mayor vaughn making calls angrilly into the phone.I pick up my cell phone and call the newspapers.and the war begins.


Spoiler:
walk along the sandy beach by the bridge pointing to the TV cameras where it all happened.
"there it bit into my leg and dragged me under.I foguht for a while but when i was about to give up a pod of dolphins came and rescued me."...i went on through my experience and then went for a drive.
I parked at the beach and settled down on my towel and took off my shirt showing my tan,six pack abs and i closed my eyes smirking at the thought of the girls next to me checking me out.Suddenly,I was in the water.I looked around and then i saw it again.It swam effortlessly in the water advancing towards it's prey,me?no...it was liz.i swim in front of her and feel each row of teeth puncture into my skin...further into my body and breaking bones.and i start seeing red..i know im dying because i satrt seeing a bright light and then....
I wake upscreaming scaring everyone on the beach.and as I end my scream i see a kid go under.the water churn and turn the red shade of blood.I see his top half bob up and down..without the bottom half and i punch the mayor on my way off the beach.
"I warned you and you were to ignorant to listen.now there is a kid DEAD because of you!,"i point to the EMT's getting the top of the kid,"there is nyour proof of a shark in these waters.NOW CLOSE THE BEACHES OR IT WILL CLOSE THIS TOWN UP BY SENDING OUR TOURIST SEASON AWAY!"
I storm off and drive away as nthe mayor holds his borken and bloody nose.

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