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Post  captainmason on 6/17/2011, 12:17 am

introduction

What would be Kilimanjaro,Africa
74.9 million years ago


It stalked its prey through the maze of cliffs and crevices.The baby Triceratops, in a panic, had dashed up to what would be Mount Kilimanjaro,The beast following behind.It could smell the beasts horrible scent which smells like a mixture sweat and bog water. The triceratops wasnt even thinking about hiding,it just wanted to live and escape.That was not an option.The beast picked up pace as it recognized its environment.The triceratop turned left and almost fell into a deep crevice.cornered.The beast turned the corner and growled shooting saliva mixed with blood and flesh out of its snout.it charged and bit hard down onto the triceratops neck almost insantly crushing its windpipe and spine.The beast started to eat when the ground shook.The crevice opened up and the beas fell inside into a hidden chamber of liquid ice-like material where it froze.waiting to be unleashed.When it would be unleashed,it would kill,eat,and cause chaos throughout all of Africa.

chapter 1
Kilimanjaro
present day



day 1
A bus of tourists soared through the plains,quickly approaching the mountain.
"Ok, before we get started I would like to go through the safety rules one more time.Firstly,stay with the guide at all time.Secondly,Watch your footing,the mountain is extremly treachorous.And lastly,Do take pictures but dont use flash.It tends to scare th wildife and there are lions around here.Thank you and enjoy your climb,"the tour guide finished with a plastic smile.damn I need a life...[/i she thought as the the radio buzzed in.

[i]If anyone... hear me we are.....danger.....guide.......dead.....injured.....whaever it is,it is still.....there.....send....with guns and......AH!!!!!!!
is all that came in over the radio.It ends shivers down her spine even thought it was 110 degrees.She continued to hea screens so she unplugged the radio.The screams continued.She looked up and saw the beast looking start trough the windshield,its snout caked in dried and wet blood.She screamed as the beast broke through the windshield and went for her legs.She managed to pick up a bottle of beer.For once she was glad someone broke the rules.She smashed the half full bottle over the beasts head and it went on ripping her legs to shreds.In pain,she picked up the flare gun and shot the beast.It yelped with surprise and pain as it fur caught and so did she.The fire spread through out the bus but the beast managed to go back out the windshield.The woman was convulsing and screaming in agony and then the fire reached the fuel and the bus exploded in a fireball hotter than the African summer day.and then it was quiet aside from the noise of burning twigs,metal,plastic,and flesh.The best let out a howl and went back to the its mountain dwelling.Still hungry from 74.9 million years of hunger.






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Post  Pigs on 6/27/2011, 10:43 am

You should put spaces in between the periods and commas, mate. It's hard to read it without spaces. I really like it and it's really gorey which is cool.
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Post  captainmason on 7/4/2011, 11:43 pm

chapter 2
setting:The Smithsonian's Institute of Natrual History


A woman walked through the Ice Age exhibit giving a tour.
"Can anyone tell me what this is?"
The group of students yelled "SABERTOOTH TIGER!!!"
She laughed and nodded."This animal was the best hunter of its time.Huge claws,and TEETH,made it top of the foodchain.Next we'll-"
she was interrupted by the intercom,"Elizabeth Reed,report to the archaeology department.I repeat,Elizabeth Reed to the Archaeology department."
"I'm sorry kids thats me..."
she waves a tour guide over who takes off where she left off as she walks to the offices.her heels like claws tapping on solid ice.


She walked in the offices to see two FBI agents sitting.She immediately slowed down.
"Please sit down Miss Reed. We would like to ask you a few questions."
She complied as they out in a tape.
"I must warn you,this tape is extremely graphic."
She watched what looked like a tourist bus having a safari.She could hear the staticy distress call then the screaming people,the blood,the fire,and then the beast.
The tape ended with the tour guide's charred face falling in front of the camera.
She lurched for the trash can and vomited in it.
She had seen a tragic death and,what she thought, a sabertooth tiger attacking people.
The FBI agent turned off the tape and directed his full attention to her.
"So...Miss Reed,what killed twenty United States Citizens and a Supreme Court Judge?"

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